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Anonymous asked in Education & ReferenceHomework Help · 2 months ago

What s a good thesis statement for my argumentative essay?

Is this good enough ??

Although birth control can reduce pregnancy it can also have a lot of dangerous effects on women

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    Birth control doesn't reduce pregnancy; it reduces the risk of pregnancy. Comma after "pregnancy".  "A lot" is too informal for academic writing. What are these dangerous effects? Have you done your research? Your thesis should set up the rest of your essay, which will support the thesis. Pregnancy poses risks to women, too. Are you going to try to establish that the birth control pill poses more dangers than pregnancy does? 

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